A beautiful book cover can be quite seductive, much like the dreamlike
spectacle of the circus. However, just as the circus is ultimately an illusion
designed for frivolous entertainment, so is Erin Morgenstern’s glitzy but
ultimately hollow attempt at a fantasy novel. While rich in visual imagery, The Night Circus is an insipid and
tedious read that is all flash and no substance, and has more to offer in
common gimmicks than in plot coherence and characterization.
Narrated in a nonlinear fashion, The
Night Circus takes place in Victorian London, where a magical touring
circus only comes into being when the sun goes down. At the center of this
phenomenon are two apprentices—Celia, daughter of Prospero the Enchanter; and
Marco, the adopted protégé of the mysterious Mr. A.H.—who have been trained
extensively in magic and the art of show business in order to settle a rivalry
between their mentors. Along with their intersecting storylines, we have a vast
menagerie of performers and patrons, including the M. Chandresh Lefèvre, the
ringleader; Tsukiko, the contortionist, Herr Frederick Thiessen, the German
clockmaker; the teenage twin psychics, Poppet and Widget, and their friend, a curious
young circus enthusiast named Bailey, who turns to the circus to escape his
family problems.
Morgenstern clearly enjoys introducing new characters and incorporating
new plot threads, which she does in excess. However, she fails to do them
justice, as she lacks the ability the construct a coherent narrative. The world
she conjures never achieves depth, being populated by one-dimensional
characters and meandering subplots that don’t go anywhere. The vivid
descriptions and striking visuals only serve to please readers on a superficial
level; take that away and all that’s left is a flimsy skeleton of a
half-realized, poorly conceived excuse for a novel.
Supposedly, Celia and Marco have been brought up to take part in a
magical duel that pits them against each other, despite being unaware of the
rules and conditions, and the whole premise of the duel itself being
deliberately vague. When the details are finally revealed in the eleventh hour
of the novel, the big revelation is completely predictable and anticlimactic,
and from there a lazily written ending soon follows that is as ambiguous as it
is contrived.
I would strongly advise readers not to waste their time with such a weak,
muddled mess of cheap spectacle masquerading as a story. There are very few
redeeming qualities in this one, so don’t let the pretty cover entice you into
this nonsensical vortex.